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A Fitting Grave - The Ash Nazg Challenge
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celandine_g From: celandine_g Date: November 12th, 2006 04:12 pm (UTC) (Link)
I really enjoyed this little piece. The imagery and dark mood you so wonderfully conveyed, showed the insidious nature of the Ring and how it uses everyone's dark side against them. I loved how you enlarged on this theme--suggested by Tolkien in Sam's original vision. It was very believable as the Ring offered Sam his heart's desire (but warped with evil). Only Frodo's goodness and calling voice could counteract the spell's powerful temptation. And how well it did. Very nice.
serai1 From: serai1 Date: November 21st, 2006 12:02 am (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you like it. The central image of Sam thrusting his hands into the soil of Mordor came to me very intensely, and the rest just followed from it.
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